Critical feedback and improving work

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 During my presentation I tried to clearly explain to my group what is my main project about and where my inspiration came from.  I presented my thinking process and how the logo design developed in the project.

The feedback I received was generally positive and very constructive and gave me many ideas how I could change in the logo and maybe remove the black frame or think about different colours. We also talked about the uniform colours and how I would present the logo on them. They mentioned that I should consider the uniform colour and maybe try something more bright than beige , we all agreed that would be nice to  design it on the white shirt 




After receiving the feedback from my friends I decided to re-work my logo again. This time I removed the  black frame around the logo and I have change the colours and the background. I will talk about this deeply in new post.
Version before changes



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  1. Sam Dargan27 February 2022 at 12:38

    We discussed changing the font/typeface in our tutorial - have you got any further with this?

    I was looking at Ladybird books the other day - these were/are instructional books, published mainly in the 1960's and 70's in the UK that were aimed at primary and secondary schools. Have a look at these (although not the updated ones as they are intended for an adult audience) for their use of 'serif' fonts: https://www.bbc.co.uk/news/uk-england-leicestershire-48924915

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